I agree with some of your points, and I would add a few more
1. English is the Official language for all government and judicial business. If a defendant requires an interpreter, then the defendant pays if they are found guilty or lose the civil case.
2. End tax exemptions for ALL political pacs, unions, special interest groups and lobbyists. If they want to support an issue or candidate, they pay for that support themselves.
3. All firearms must be licensed and insured.
4. A surtax is placed on all political ads for both candidates and issues, equal to the cost of the commercial.
5. All radio and TV stations licensed by the government must provide equal access for opposing views
6. No tax reductions for any business that does not produce 50% of their products in the USA, like the trump cabal, but minimal corporate tax for companies that produce 90% or more of products domestically.
7. All veterans with service connected disabilities and injuries receive no cost 'cadillac' health care, all veterans who have non service connected health problems, like obesity, smoking, drugs, alcohol and carelessness, pay the same as the the general public.
8. Wage cap removed from Social Security, and all income is taxed from dollar one, however the rate should be lowered.
9. All current laws for the judicial code and IRS must be reviewed and out dated laws must be removed from the books, and federal law will supercede all state laws.
10 .Bill of Rights and constitution are revised in clear, concise wording, without ambiguities in interpretation.
11. Supreme court justices are limited to 12 year terms and 1/3 are replaced with every presidential election.
Here is my proposed agenda for a Convention of States.
1) Term limits for all members of Congress.
2) Term limits for all federal judges.
3) Allow California to leave the Union.
4) Repeal the IRS and Federal Income Tax.
5) End the Fed.
6) Gold Standard for the Dollar.
7) Eliminate the Commerce Clause.
8) End anchor babies.
9) Withdraw from UN, IMF, NATO, NAFTA and other globalist organizations.
10) English as official language.
11) Ban Sharia Law.